Holy Lance
Triforce of Power 
The Hero of Time
Farewell my shadow, you who stand at the end of the path I did not choose~Mithos, Tales [M:0]
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Post by Holy Lance on Aug 6, 2005 10:42:11 GMT -5
He looked at her then looked down. "See you" he said. He slipped out of his shirt and fell onto the sharp jagged rocks below
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Post by cliffgirl on Aug 6, 2005 10:43:28 GMT -5
" fine leave me " she said running away
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Holy Lance
Triforce of Power
The Hero of Time
Farewell my shadow, you who stand at the end of the path I did not choose~Mithos, Tales [M:0]
Posts: 1,654
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Post by Holy Lance on Aug 6, 2005 10:44:51 GMT -5
As Zac fell, he saw Rose leave. He turned over and hit the rocks
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Post by cliffgirl on Aug 6, 2005 13:08:36 GMT -5
a few hour later rose came to the mountain
she went down a path to the bottom of it and saw zac dead body....
she held it in her arms and took him to the church
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Post by Kaora on Aug 6, 2005 19:31:49 GMT -5
ooc~ WHAT. THE. HECK!!! He just... DIED?!?
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Post by LonelyCheza on Aug 6, 2005 19:37:05 GMT -5
((UM... Yeah... that was pretty dumb. *looks around* that was random. So why'd you make Zac die? He totally would've had a come back w/leera... ... ..... ... Ok no complaining here! BRING ON THE NEW HOTTIE!!! unless... you're not making a girl are you?!  ;;;  ) |
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Post by Kaora on Aug 6, 2005 19:38:28 GMT -5
ooc~ I'm hoping its a guy... this forum desperatly needs more guys.
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Post by LonelyCheza on Aug 6, 2005 19:41:26 GMT -5
((Ditto.))
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NerdChick
Gallant
Official Harvest Moon Fangirl
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Post by NerdChick on Aug 6, 2005 19:41:47 GMT -5
Ooc| Dear Goddess yes.
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Post by Kaora on Aug 6, 2005 19:47:17 GMT -5
ooc~ Wow. This is just... wow. I don't even have anything more to say ;; ... ... HE DIED! -cough- FELL THROUGH HIS SHIRT AND DIED! ... How do you fall through your shirt? |
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Post by LonelyCheza on Aug 6, 2005 19:50:55 GMT -5
((I think he means 'fell out of his shirt' but ROSE WAS HOLDING HIS HAND!!! I'm sorry and hate to do this but... man... I'm gonna get booted off this site FORGIVE ME but I have to do this!!! BAD RPG ALERT. SORRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! I kind of like the fact that Zac dies though, it adds some interest to the story. Nice. Could've been written better though T_T; but NICE! *exalts zac for creativity but smites for bad writing* LOL JK I'm just exalting you )) |
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Post by Kaora on Aug 6, 2005 19:54:48 GMT -5
ooc~ Its okay, Cheza-chan. -pats-
I.. kinda.... okay, I agree. There wasn't any emotion. I mean, Rose said she cried but it wasn't detailed! And Zac was just... there. Like a robot.
-hides- I am so getting Smited...
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Post by LonelyCheza on Aug 6, 2005 20:01:56 GMT -5
((I'LL EXALT YOU!!! Thanks for standin' up for me! Gotta wait an hour though... stupid hour...
but any-who yeah what's w/the one liners? I've been noticing a lot lately that all rose does is one liners! She says:
" fine leave me " she said running away
Leera would've:
"ZAAAC!!!" Leera's heart sank, following Zac to the sharp rocks. She turned away, closing her eyes. No no no no no... Zac... A tear rolled down her cheek as she heard the infinite abyss meet with Zac's body. "Zac..." She muttered weakly, holding the edge of the mountain, her tears filling the void that Zac left behind in her heart.
Ok, Leera wouldn't have been that emotional about it but Rose is (obviously) emotional about Zac so I tried to format it to fit Rose's style. SEEE!!!!!!! It just sounds better... in my opinion of course... sorry...))
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Post by Kaora on Aug 6, 2005 20:14:07 GMT -5
ooc~ I'll exault you, too. I completely agree. Can we PLEASE try to be a little more... thoughful of our posts?
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Post by Roy on Aug 7, 2005 1:50:33 GMT -5
((That was...random... maybe I should kill Zephil too and replace him with another guy))
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