the clinic (( rose's house))

[cliffgirl]

rose and fayt went to the clinic .
Rose looked very pale and sick

[Baralia]

Rose was still on Fayt's back. "Doctor!" He came out and gave him a dirty look. "If this is about your friend tell her I am not going to treat her is she is just going to leave without even saying anything!" He started to turn around but Fayt stopped him. "This is my other friend. Her name is Rose. She isn't feeling good, and I'm not sure what is wrong." He sat her down and the doctor started to examine her.

/Remember more sentences and use proper grammer/

[cliffgirl]

Rose looked up at Fayt
" Thank you very much for bring me to the Doctor " Rose said smiling lightly
" I hope i don't have to get a shot "

[Baralia]

"You might have to, you know its flu season...you probably shouldn't of went swimming yesturaday." The doctor looked up at him with a serious look.

"You went swimming in the ocean...in winter!!! Are you stupid do want to die!" He fiddled with a cabinet and pulled out a needle. "You deserve this shot if you were dumb enough to swim in the snow!" He pricked her in the arm and threw the needle away. Rest here for a while okay. You should feel better in about a hour." He walked into the backroom again.

I wonder what he does in there? I bet that shot hurt I'm glad I didn't need one. "Sorry for having to leave you but I need to get to work. Get plenty of rest okay!" He ran out the door winking at her as he left.

[cliffgirl]

" oww that hurt .........."
Rose looked up at Fayt
" oh yes Good bye"


rose got up and went home